I thought you guys would like some stories. 
Note: I will first be doing a Star Wars one then an Orbiter story. All help would be greatly appreciated.
Chapter 1: The Beginning
“No!” John Bushker yelled as his brother fell crumpled on the ground by the Imperials laser fire.
“John get back!” Commander Harry yelled to John as his platoon of men kept the stormtroopers back. The situation was bad, after a failed assault against the Imperial base. The Y-Wing assault had failed against the approaching Imperials. The GR-75 transports were loaded and beginning to go back to the Reviver, a Nebulon B-Frigate.
“Sir, Sir were under attack,” a voice came into his mind.
“What?!” John replied looking around in amazement.
“Two Imperial Star Destroyers and 6 Dreadnaughts are assaulting our group of 3 Frigates,” the officer replied to John.
“Launch our fighters and bombers then!”
“They are already launched and holding the Imperials off.”
“Why aren’t we jumping?”
“Interdictor cruiser,” the officer said softly.
“Destroy it!” I yelled to him.
“I understand captain.”
Recently leaving from Isold IV, the fleet of a Star Cruiser, 9 Nebulon B-Frigates and 14 Assault Frigates had split heading back to Mon Calamari. They were the smallest led by the Reviver.
“This is Red Squadron, Reviver are we cleared for strike against Interdictor,” Red Leader asked John.
“Roger, get Gold Squadron with you to help take down its shields,” John replied looking into space as the Imperials were being bewildered by the starfighters. The Y-Wings, ion cannons were disabling the Imperials turbolasers holding the brunt of the Star Destroyer firepower off.
“Interdictor down,” Gold Leader told the Reviver.
[FONT="] “Got it, launch now,” John replied to Gold Leader as the stars became starlines.[/FONT]
How do you guys like it?
EDIT: For some reason Orbiter forum hates me because of last line.
Note: I will first be doing a Star Wars one then an Orbiter story. All help would be greatly appreciated.Star Wars:
Rise from Tyranny
“No!” John Bushker yelled as his brother fell crumpled on the ground by the Imperials laser fire.
“John get back!” Commander Harry yelled to John as his platoon of men kept the stormtroopers back. The situation was bad, after a failed assault against the Imperial base. The Y-Wing assault had failed against the approaching Imperials. The GR-75 transports were loaded and beginning to go back to the Reviver, a Nebulon B-Frigate.
“Sir, Sir were under attack,” a voice came into his mind.
“What?!” John replied looking around in amazement.
“Two Imperial Star Destroyers and 6 Dreadnaughts are assaulting our group of 3 Frigates,” the officer replied to John.
“Launch our fighters and bombers then!”
“They are already launched and holding the Imperials off.”
“Why aren’t we jumping?”
“Interdictor cruiser,” the officer said softly.
“Destroy it!” I yelled to him.
“I understand captain.”
Recently leaving from Isold IV, the fleet of a Star Cruiser, 9 Nebulon B-Frigates and 14 Assault Frigates had split heading back to Mon Calamari. They were the smallest led by the Reviver.
“This is Red Squadron, Reviver are we cleared for strike against Interdictor,” Red Leader asked John.
“Roger, get Gold Squadron with you to help take down its shields,” John replied looking into space as the Imperials were being bewildered by the starfighters. The Y-Wings, ion cannons were disabling the Imperials turbolasers holding the brunt of the Star Destroyer firepower off.
“Interdictor down,” Gold Leader told the Reviver.
[FONT="] “Got it, launch now,” John replied to Gold Leader as the stars became starlines.[/FONT]
How do you guys like it?
EDIT: For some reason Orbiter forum hates me because of last line.
