my first Mc redstone tutorial:
Let's explain minecraft redstone [tutorial] [HD] [english] PART1 The basics - YouTube
I would be thankful ffor feedback,
greetings :tiphat:, HAL9001
Well, it's quite terrible.
You start the tutorial without any introduction, in a world where there's already a bunch of redstone stuff. Zombies, chickens and other mobs are incredibly loud and your friend can barely be heard.
You go into the menu to set the mobs to peaceful - something that should have been done long before you even started recording. Still, the Minecraft sound is very loud compared to the rest.
You started the tutorial at night in a poorly illuminated area.
Since you chose to start with "Redstone is an ore you can mine", you could at least show the ore, tell where it is found and what you need to mine it.
You then placed a bunch of redstone wire and jumped straight into pistons. There are quite a few things you should have covered before you got to pistons, like the different power sources, the distance the power travels and the different ways to extend the distance of the wire. You only explained that after you were done with pistons...
Around 4 minutes in you jump into rapid pulsar, timers and randomizes. That is not the topic for part one of the tutorial.
Than the OR gate... a terrible design for the OR gate. And RS nor latches.
From about 4 minutes on, you activated the rapid pulsar which keeps creating terrible noise and it's very difficult to figure out what you're actually trying to say.
At the end of the vidoe, the sun rises. Also, at the end you say that this covers the absolute basics for redstone. I disagree. You never mentioned some of the vital stuff just for transportation of power, like the different ways of transporting power up, down and in all directions. You showed an inverter, but never explained what it's used for. You jumped straight into the hard stuff.
Your friend is also there for no reason. He talks at the start of the video and just causes chatter, but doesn't actually ask anything. Why include him at all? There are also a bunch of ugly and misplaced sound effects in the video...
Anyone who stumbles across your redstone tutorial video will find a new one after watching 15 seconds of it.