First, as we point out, there will often be difference between what IMFD shows us while we are recording, and what it shows you during the replay - but the differences are usually very small. If it's more than a percent or 2 you may have set something wrong.
The first playback, around the time you told me to input the target as 'brighton beach' (I did, but for some reason it didn't change), everything involving IMFD itself starting going wrong.
I'm not at home, so I'm relying on memory as to what exactly the tutorial said - but I'm pretty sure you were instructed to set the LANDING target as "brighton beach" (without the quote marks) on the IMFD Mani Config page, not in Target Intercept or Map. You should have highlighted the "Landing Target" line (using <UP> and <DN>, then pressed <SET>, then the base name (not case sensitive). If this was done correctly the bases name will be displayed there on the config page, and some additional info is available from Map.
Or were you talking about Base Approach? Remember that base names must be spelled correctly, the exact same as the base name shown in Orbiter's Object Info page.
Other than that, I need more details about what specifically is going on to find the problems, it's usually best to start a thread in the "Tutorials and Challenges" subforum. Make sure to use the <IMFD> and <PROBLEM> tags when you create the thread, and pick a descriptive title so more people will try to help. I read every thread with <IMFD> as a tag, but often only get online once a week or so.
As for the speed of the notes, there are two ways to help with this. First, bring up the recorder dialog and uncheck (Play at recorded speed), then se your time accell to 0.1x, the notes will stay on screen ten times longer. Be warned, IMFD will respond slower at 0.1x time accell.
The other solution is to print the annotation. Inside the Orbiter/Flights folder will be a folder with the same name as the scenario name of the tutorial. Inside will be files for each of the vessels. Find the .atc file for the vessel you start in (ie, GL-01.atc) and open it in a text editor such as notepad. Buried in amongst the ENG data you will see lines with a NOTE tag, and all the text that is displayed on the screen.
BTW, The updated version of this manual (some error corrections and expanded coverage of Offsetting, Delta-V, and other advanced concepts) should be out in a couple weeks.